📖 Story: 1.5/5
❤️🔥 Characters: 3/5
🌶️ Spice Level: 5/5
🔁 Re-read?: maybe
⏭️ Next book?: maybe
So. This book was... something.
I have some issues with the author's choices But, let me just say. GOD DAMN. Like holy fucking shit. Holy smutttt.
The book was good. basically porn, but good quality porn!! Enough porn that if i decide to read the second, for some more multiple hottie porn, I need a nice less smutty break. Which isn't a problem and i will get into that in a sec.
Issues:
- Blond hair, blue eyed, white girl 🙄
- yes cliche, fine, moving on - in my head she doesn't look like that
- 40% of sex or how hot everyone is per page - usually. I guess this is the point of the book so not too big of a deal.
- Not much of her doing her actual job. But she was still getting paid. SO - it felt a little prostitute-y... so i didn't like that.
- Also, in the beginning, they said they want it to be professional and shit but --> that is so not happening.
- making her come in a car and go to a formal lunch meeting?? and then fucking her on the way back - two of them both times. nuh-uh professional my ass
- No character development. hmph! need that shit, even in glorified pornnnn!!! make me attached to the characters. i want to want the next book - i have no urgency for that right now...
- fucked 10 times in one day and probably twice as many orgasms??? ouch and so unrealistic!!
- why was the book crammed into approx 2 weeks? most authors can't do well with such a short timeline, and CS Berry was no different.
- Sex positions -- this falls into editorial category a bit but:
- would you be able to make eye contact if your head is upside down and you're sucking? never done that position so i cant imagine it...
- reverse cowgirl on Guy 1 but then Guy 2 standing, shes sucking either Guy 2 or Guy 3 (she kepting alternating) but Guy 2 can also suck her tits?????
- probably a couple other ones too..
That's it...i think?
Im overstimulated from the amount of sex they have -like holy shit again
Not a horrible book tho! writing wasn't too bad, overall. just more fucking than plot. more fucking than character development. more fucking than anything else.
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